Writing in persona

Both classes have had double sessions today in HUMAN writing as a person or animal on the battlefield during WWI.

Both classes have impressed me so much with their focus, their commitment and their kindness when offering critique to each other; knowing that telling someone how their work could be better is the kindest thing we can do for each other.

I would strongly encourage you to ask your child to show you their descriptive writing that they have been working on because the students should be really proud. I also know they would welcome your feedback too to help them improve it even further before the deadline for redrafting on Monday.

Well done to the XPG Crew today!